Tuesday, February 14, 2012
Intro #2 Cause Essay
Woohoo!!! Cancun, Mexico here we come. My family looks forward to the month of February more than the arrival of Santa Claus most years. For the past six years we have taken a family vacation to an exotic location that will provide us with sun on our faces and warm breezes in our hair. I start planning for the next year as soon as we get home, spending countless hours at the computer looking for the cheapest prices and the perfect location. This year Mexico's beautiful sandy beaches, mysterious cenotes, and the rich cultural history of the ruins was the perfect match.
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Neither intro quite closes the deal: we need reason, cause, because, why--some key word to let us know where we are and where we are going.
ReplyDeleteWoohoo!!! Cancun, Mexico here we come. My family looks forward to the month of February more than the arrival of Santa Claus most years because by then the built up anticipation for our yearly vacation has reached the boiling point. We are practically exploding at the seems awaiting the day of departure. There are several reasons we choose warm, exotic locations for our get aways, the warm sun on our faces and brilliant breezes in our hair, takes us away from the exhausting cold and misery of Maine winters.
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ReplyDeleteEvery year, starting in March, I spend countless hours on the computer comparing exotic vacation spots, the best possible flights to fit into everyones tight schedules, and of course negotiating the best possible prices to fit our bank account. Why??, you may ask. Because we take as a family, one or maybe even two weeks in February to enjoy an exotic vacation spot with sun on our faces and warm, brilliant breezes in our hair.
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